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I like the way you described fizzy because you talked about when first got him. Did you think about describing about your other two dogs. to improve you could put a little more writing in there.
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I like the way you described fizzy because you talked about when first got him. Did you think about describing about your other two dogs. to improve you could put a little more writing in there.
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